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寞子瞬

<p><strong><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">◎唯有乡情淹不死</font></strong></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">和同行的人一起</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">我们逮到一条大鱼</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">它好大好大啊</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">于是，我们这群人</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">如果渴了，就喝鱼汤</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">如果饿了，就吃鱼肉</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">在去大洋彼岸的船上</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">如果，有谁想家了</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">就要像</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">这条吃不到尽头的大鱼一样</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">丢在海里</font></p>
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<p><strong><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">◎实习牙医</font></strong></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">群牙林立却没有反抗</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">舌头红润却没有喜事</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">口腔外莽撞的钳子</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">飞进飞出</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">白茫茫的牙医似雪</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">黑乎乎的蛀牙如碳</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">他夹出它们时</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">像孩子拣到糖一样兴奋</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">而我的嘴里，却像</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#990000">刚刚发射完神州七号</font></p>
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陈建

有橄榄般的诗意。<br/><br/>但最近总忍不住想，若能把诗歌结尾处的诗意挪至开头，是否有违诗伦？