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[原创]人物画廊（组诗）

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发表于 2007-12-19 01:54:21 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">当时给我打了电话</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
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                                        <br/><br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">他最终会回到水库弯，老死龙山</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
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                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我就是何士煜</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">唐以凤</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">唐以凤永远不在了。这世界上</font></span><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">再也找不到她。唐以凤是得肾坏死</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">而亡的。她的老伴：一位瘸腿农民到市政府讨过钱</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">　　</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">唐以凤年轻时守寡，独自拉扯两个儿女成人</font></span><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">她在后勤处工作，卖副食，做豆奶</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">不同的男人进出过她的屋里，都没能留下来</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">　　</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">唐以凤曾到精神病院看望过我</font></span><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">带着礼物：橘子，饼干。她是</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我的学校唯一看望过我的人</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">　　</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">出院后，她曾给我介绍女朋友。现在她死了</font></span><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">事后我才知道。她被火化，埋在家乡文胜</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">关于她的死有多种说法，一种是</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">　　</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">她欠人钱而被咒死；一种是关于她的独身</font></span><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一个人来了去了，这世界什么也没改变</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">仿佛她不曾到来，也不曾离去</span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">
                                        <br/></font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">　　</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.25pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">霞崇山</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">霞崇山死了。喝农药死的</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">霞崇山生于重兴乡九大队</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">作过乡村教师</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">1974</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">年。他的孙子死于火灾</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">龙山村小学。他的寝室燃了</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">留下乌黑的尸体</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font size="3"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">霞崇山与女学生有过新闻</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">在乡中心小学</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">他为此难过</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font size="3"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">他</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">70</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">多岁时我们在乡镇见了一面</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">他询问我的病情，给我女儿买糖</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">叫我再娶</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">霞崇山一生教书。犯过两次错</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">他是我的姑表爷</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">我小学和初中的老师</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　岳月帮</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">??</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">　　</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">一个经历几十年</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">农村生活的人，她</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font size="3"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">买</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">2</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">元</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">5</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">角一双的拖鞋</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">8</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">元一床的棉絮</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">15</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">元一件的人造革背心</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">被女儿责备为图便宜买老牛</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">这个人曾在她儿子所在的学校呆过</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">她儿子住进疯人院</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">她带孙女，拣垃圾</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">去看她儿子时从车站走到医院</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">也不坐三轮</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font size="3"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">这个人</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><font face="Times New Roman">60</font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">岁还在帮别人打谷子</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">在自家养鹅，猪，鸡，牛</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">煮饭洗衣，撒种锄地</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font size="3">这个人就是我母亲</font></span></p>
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发表于 2007-12-21 21:45:03 | 显示全部楼层
关于诗歌如何避免在中国最广阔的现实中缺席，这是个老问题了。楼主走在很多诗人的老路上。我也在盛行此风之时写过办公室对面凄然的面孔、火葬场的职员、乡村文化站等等诸如此类的题材，不成功。后来的想法是：诗歌于我，首要的意义是个体之有存，因此，无论什么题材，都不能只是记录，特别是所谓时代生活的记录。在新闻、纪实、摄影、影视之外，在记录之外，诗歌应该还有可为。湖南韦白在同类题材上有些特色，建议参考。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-23 04:53:12 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢提醒！
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