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发表于 2007-12-27 09:12:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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发表于 2007-12-27 11:02:19 | 显示全部楼层
这样的句子也是诗歌?
 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-27 11:14:57 | 显示全部楼层
你心中的诗歌应该是怎样的,说来听听,我很想讨教。
发表于 2007-12-27 11:18:21 | 显示全部楼层
<p>可能说过了哟,每个人心里都有自己的标准。</p><p>你的作品读来读去,就像堆文字,读不出什么来。</p><p>抱歉,我不写诗歌,可能没有发言权。我尊敬一切诗人,包括写诗歌的。</p>
 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-27 11:35:28 | 显示全部楼层
<p>怎么快就回帖了,谢谢,我虽然写了七千首诗,但大都不是我写的。我几乎无人间老师。这首是不是诗,我也不很明白。所以我想索取诗的定义。</p><p>昨天梦中梦到以上景像,仔细想来,深含像征,早晨,马虎一下,就发了。</p>
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