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沈泉芳

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<p><strong>心声</strong></p>
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<p><strong>住在大地的点上</strong></p>
<p><strong>发出生命的乐唱</strong></p>
<p><strong>高歌自由和爱的</strong></p>
<p><strong>诗章</strong></p>
<p><strong>永恒地来到</strong></p>
<p><strong>天空沁出芬芳的</strong></p>
<p><strong>蜜</strong></p>
<p><strong>大地献出甘醇的</strong></p>
<p><strong>酒</strong></p>
<p><strong>生命里没药成河</strong></p>
<p><strong>岁月里欢笑腾飞</strong></p>
<p><strong>用渺小的血</strong></p>
<p><strong>发出甜美的心</strong></p>
<p><strong>赞美造物主的</strong></p>
<p><strong>无限慈爱</strong></p>
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<p><strong>祈祷</strong></p>
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<p><strong>激情一过</strong></p>
<p><strong>大地是一片深秋季节</strong></p>
<p><strong>大路小径</strong></p>
<p><strong>飘满落叶</strong></p>
<p><strong>在一片潇瑟之中</strong></p>
<p><strong>露出可怕的寒冬</strong></p>
<p><strong>之首</strong></p>
<p><strong>永恒的太阳</strong></p>
<p><strong>你有使人返老还童之力</strong></p>
<p><strong>请你使出摘星拿月之功</strong></p>
<p><strong>使天空转入永恒的春天</strong></p>
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<p><strong>活鱼</strong></p>
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<p><strong>失去追求上帝之心</strong></p>
<p><strong>哲学成为枯燥</strong></p>
<p><strong>诗歌失去光彩</strong></p>
<p><strong>一遍死的黑暗</strong></p>
<p><strong>临到大地</strong></p>
<p><strong>上帝是永恒青春</strong></p>
<p><strong>上帝是灵泉活水</strong></p>
<p><strong>在他里</strong></p>
<p><strong>生命如活泉中的</strong></p>
<p><strong>小鱼</strong></p>
<p><strong>跳跃畅游</strong></p>
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<p><strong>威力</strong></p>
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<p><strong>爱的火焰</strong></p>
<p><strong>无比伟大</strong></p>
<p><strong>他能烧透大地</strong></p>
<p><strong>把荆棘篱笆</strong></p>
<p><strong>一扫而光</strong></p>
<p><strong>从最卑微处</strong></p>
<p><strong>烧起</strong></p>
<p><strong>直烧到青草，</strong></p>
<p><strong>树木燃起</strong></p>
<p><strong>永恒的爱火</strong></p>
<p><strong>让冰霜熔化</strong></p>
<p><strong>或远远躲避</strong></p>
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<p><strong>金日</strong></p>
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<p><strong>从最艰难困苦中</strong></p>
<p><strong>神冲破重重阻挡</strong></p>
<p><strong>扫尽黑暗和污浊</strong></p>
<p><strong>把天空烧成通红</strong></p>
<p><strong>永恒的太阳</strong></p>
<p><strong>停留在一望无际中的</strong></p>
<p><strong>大地上空</strong></p>
<p><strong>那颗完美的珍珠般的</strong></p>
<p><strong>&nbsp;</strong><strong>金辉烂月</strong></p>
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<p><strong>星座</strong></p>
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<p><strong>天空一道爱的闪电</strong></p>
<p><strong>一颗恒星登上蓝天</strong></p>
<p><strong>大地多少泥沙</strong></p>
<p><strong>被雨水冲洗尽尽</strong></p>
<p><strong>舒心复原的星心</strong></p>
<p><strong>归到了爱的慈怀</strong></p>
<p><strong>星儿闪着金光</strong></p>
<p><strong>点缀神州夜空</strong></p>
<p><strong>惟有一个心愿</strong></p>
<p><strong>如日日夜兼程</strong></p>
<p><strong>把爱传递</strong></p>
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<p><strong>燃</strong></p>
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<p><strong>爱</strong></p>
<p><strong>永远安详平和激奋</strong></p>
<p><strong>让圣徒平静燃烧</strong></p>
<p><strong>越过苦难的岁月</strong></p>
<p><strong>来到生命的乐河</strong></p>
<p><strong>唯有救人之心</strong></p>
<p><strong>点燃我思想之花</strong></p>
<p><strong>在荒凉的大地</strong></p>
<p><strong>高举永恒的上帝</strong></p>
<p><strong>让玫瑰燎原</strong></p>
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<p><strong>电的真实</strong></p>
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<p><strong>诗歌</strong></p>
<p><strong>不在字语高深</strong></p>
<p><strong>而在内里平静</strong></p>
<p><strong>一股向上的活火</strong></p>
<p><strong>发出救人的闪光</strong></p>
<p><strong>获救之人</strong></p>
<p><strong>才能感到</strong></p>
<p><strong>诗传播信息的</strong></p>
<p><strong>真实电火</strong></p>
<p><strong>信而真实的</strong></p>
<p><strong>当存感谢的心</strong></p>
<p><strong>上苍让你</strong></p>
<p><strong>永蒙福祉</strong></p>
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<p><strong>活火</strong></p>
<p><strong>红颜薄命</strong></p>
<p><strong>绯红的情</strong></p>
<p><strong>把自己和他人</strong></p>
<p><strong>烧透</strong></p>
<p><strong>烧焦后</strong></p>
<p><strong>自然味同嚼蜡</strong></p>
<p><strong>走向死亡</strong></p>
<p><strong>耶稣</strong></p>
<p><strong>是活火</strong></p>
<p><strong>是至珍</strong></p>
<p><strong>在爱中</strong></p>
<p><strong>心辉煌</strong></p>
<p><strong>神同在</strong></p>
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<p><strong>防线</strong></p>
<p><strong>自由是</strong></p>
<p><strong>不容罪进入</strong></p>
<p><strong>生命的权力</strong></p>
<p><strong>生命应筑起防线</strong></p>
<p><strong>不容罪恶粘污</strong></p>
<p><strong>心灵</strong></p>
<p><strong>让爱固守</strong></p>
<p><strong>让爱长存</strong></p>
<p><strong>无爱</strong></p>
<p><strong>生命才绝望</strong></p>
<p><strong>有爱</strong></p>
<p><strong>生命才永流</strong></p></div>

沈泉芳

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白鹤林

<p>《祈祷》一首感觉还好。<br/></p>
<p>朋友：在下浅见哈！你的诗歌总的来说过于论说和空乏了，缺乏情感和细节，因而没有什么诗意。换句话说，你心里面有个很顽固的“诗歌的模式”在那里。这可能是难以找到诗的感觉，不能打动别人的原由吧。共勉！</p>